Hey guys, so it is a suggestion post. So, today I was talking to my cousin sister and she said that she wanted to read one of my stories and wanted to create one from herself. So, I gave her my phone with the 'Rival King's Secret Wife' on this app, she has read it and said that the base storyline is weak and the storyline is neglecting the boy means Hunter. She said that it has grammatical mistakes too, which I agreed. After some time I told her the spoilers of the story and told how Gulian saved Rowena and why, she just said that 'It isn't making any sense, it lacks logic' 🤧 I said that fantasy is meant to be a little illogical and she said that this story has no logic at all! 😤 I said that people like this story and they read it too. She didn't cared much and said that your storyline is weak and you should probably change it. 'It doesn't make any sense, why would Gulian save Rowena when she is from the enemy kingdom?' I said that he loved her and had love at first sight' She looked at me like she has seen a ghost! 💀. She said that there is no such thing called love at first sight when it comes to enemies! She asked me that why doTheodore and Joshua were frenemy? How did they become frenemy? I said because of a girl and she laughed saying no one fights for a girl whom they love. My cousin sister said that how would Joshua not see his daughter when stuck in the tree, I said because it was dense. 🤌🏻😤😬

She just said 'Your stories don't have logic, too childish and have no strong base'. I am literally heartbroken but why do I think she is saying the truth because sometimes I too feel my stories childish and illogical. I am feeling inferior guys! it feels like I am not supposed to be writing story, I feel like no likes my work. I have my followers, my fans and my friends but still a part of me is feeling very down with 'The Rival King's Secret Wife'. Should I be continuing the story or just delete all of the part? Am I on the wrong track? Am I writing bad?

Do people like my work?

And the most important...

Am I worthy of writing peom or stories?

*Please help me guys and tell me your views in the comments*

© Fifa 🦋